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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Earths last stand

    What caught my eye first were the few grammatical errors. There are also a few punctuation errors, but those too are easily fixed. In the part where you mention the ...

    Apr 9, 2006


Well, if I can't get this chapter to work....at least I will have exercised my fingers.
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